Oh Boi

You know you’re in for “one of those:”movies when the main character says, “I saw it with my own eyes.”

I had to restrain myself from yelling at the screen, “Well, thank God. Because it would have been totally different had you seen it with your other eyes—you know, the ones you borrowed from Grandma.”

Ack. Saw it with my own eyes? Wow. Redundancy much?

Sigh, of course, we all know my irritation is because I’m in the middle of my first draft, which are rife—STOCK FULL—of redundancies, fallacies, plot holes, & cardboard characters.

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