Comments from another crit partner, re: What Happens in Vegas:
You are so mean to make such an awesome story that I couldn’t put my ereader down! It’s a fantastic story! Yes, laugh out loud funny but not only that, because it’s all in Binda’s pov it makes her extra relatable because she’s thinking all the stuff that the average woman thinks and gets self-conscious over, too….and she stays true to character, being the average woman in an above average situation but not doing the extraordinary but rather the ordinary that makes things extraordinary…does that makes sense. I really liked her…and I loved him LOL
Whew. I think I can start breathing, now. I’ll probably upload the first-six pages so people will know what everyone’s talking about…
I just have to come up with synopsis and blurb, and I’ll be good to go!